Tue, 12/29/2009 - 18:20
Currently writing for a new audio play project. Before recruiting for voice actors, sound mixers and SFX and Score scouts, I need to first establish that this script and concept is acceptable.
PLEASE be as critical as you can for this. Praise is welcome but its what I can improve is I want.
The genre is Comedy Drama, aimed for both genders and an audience that is around 15+
This is the first Episode.
Characters
First Act
Second Act
I have attatched a word document of the draft script for you to download.
Blurb;
In a nutshell: Foreign exchange students have started University in England. All of them are roommates, and friendship and love blooms... and the occasional hatred, catfights and bad ‘yo momma’ insults ensues between the fresher’s. Our students are diverse, from the hopeless romantic, to the cheating get-around, to depressed artists and street-cred pursuers. They seem harmless. Idiotic and retarded, yes, but rest assured harmless. However, each of them leads a double life. All of them are part of a secret society, where they help the afterlife which has not yet passed on to the next world.
Juggling with coursework, ghost busting and taking turns with cooking dinner, our heroes’ lead chaotic, hectic and frantic lives. And they wouldn’t have it any other way.
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Sorry for the late reply, I've only just now had the time to read through it all. I really wasn't expecting the segement with the mobile phone, so was pleasantly suprised when that happened; so I'm really interested to find out what happens. I could really visualise what was going on.
My only critique would be to be cautious that the characters don't lapse into stereotypes, I can undertand part of the point is that they are a little surreal but there's a risk that the characters could become a little flat.
Still this is a really interesting concept with a solidy written first part!
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